18 thoughts on “While waiting”

    1. I liked that it was from the perspective of an NPC from the game, like what are the effects when a reincarnation inside game happens, and there was some gore. I always like gore. Well, now that I finished reading till chapter 30, it’s become somewhat Eeeh~.
      What complaints do you have?

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      1. My biggest beef are with two points:

        First off–the reincarnation aspect of the story: what’s the point of mentioning that the character is reincarnated when the reincarnated memories are thrown away within the first few chapters lol. Yes, I get that it was sacrificed to “find a place to belong” but then you realize that if you went back and just removed the whole premise of reincarnation, the story would have read the EXACT SAME up to that point. Indeed, the reincarnation aspect is now unable to affect all the future chapters. A really terrible plot point.

        Secondly, character development: Other than Riku’s backstory we know NOTHING about her. The author did a TEN YEAR timeskip, just so they could jump immediately into Riku being strong, but we COMPLETELY miss out on everything that makes a story interesting–the characters. We’re just implicitly told that she’s now chummy with Vrusto, and she’s for a fanatical zealot for Leivain.

        Basically, every character in the story feels like an empty husk that the author rushed to build in order to write out his fantasy of a revenge seeking hot girl warrior with red hair. After reaching chapter 12 or so I stopped reading because it was clear after bridging directly into another battle, the author is putting no thought into pacing and sensible plot/character development.

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      2. Uuh… I think you give the story too little credit.
        (Spoiler)
        The reincarnation part is just a side note. But you need to understand that it wasn’t only one person reincarnated it was two. Her memories she traded off for a place to belong, so its a sacrifice. The premise of reincarnation isn’t much about hers, it’s about her brother. In fact, he is using much of his knowledge to affect the storyline. To put it frankly, her role is to obstruct his harem obtaining wise.

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      3. To be honest, this novel is kinda frustrating to read.

        CONTAINS SPOILERS!!

        Character`s development are a joke. I mean all female characters fall in love for no reason at all and so easily too (I am including MC here). A demon spy (I am assuming she was trained) falling for a 4year old HUMAN boy and betraying her race because of it. I mean… I just cant imagine it. The demon lord`s sister apparently will follow the same destiny.

        It seems everything is against MC, there is no one she can relies on. She wished for a place where she belonged, but no one trusts her on demon side. I dont see a single person or demon supporting MC. Even Leivein (her love interest who she fall HARD for giving sparta training and food…) treats her just like a pet (and this is annoying).

        Demons are really weird too. They hate humans, thats why they cant trust MC (spiritualist family) even though she got a lot of achievements. BUUUT! Demon lord`s sister and spy falling for a human boy (from the same spiritualist family) for no reason at all is OK. I just dont understand.

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      4. @myuu

        Whoa, thanks for the big red flags. Skipping out. I feel like I’d get frustrated too.

        Anyone read The Amber sword/Heroes of Amber?

        That one has MC being in an NPC body but having a FUTURE player’s reincarnation, so he uses both memories he has to the fullest.

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      5. The reincarnation aspect does play into the story.
        As for her backstory, the introduction IS the part before the 10 year time gap.
        This shows how she became the person she is, what drove her.
        The events that happened before her father went all homicidal are not that important to her, seeing as she was treated like trash.

        I like the story, because it has death and drama, which leads to excitement, and characters being completely despicable to others, while distasteful, is fitting with the setting. I thought I would have reservations about the main character slaughtering people, but I really don’t, not with the way they act. They would just as soon slaughter as well, if they were able.

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  6. Oooh, looks interesting. Good thing I’ve read gory novels before, and am kinda used to it.
    “DOOORG!” Gonna have yet another in-progress novel that I want more chapters for! Thanks, but also, DAMN IT!

    I like reading a story from start to finish in one go. But that means waiting years for the ones I really want to read to be finished. D:

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  7. I binge read through it all already. It’s really good; if you don’t mind shockingly realistic behavior from people. Aka, they’re despicaple, and don’t hesitate to kill, and see nothing wrong with their actions, because “_____ are evil”

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  9. Checked it out after the recommendation(was actually hyped for it ) got brutally slapped in the face by the reality of the assholic, reincarnated, flag-raising, doucheass of a brother then raged quited the page after reading today’s update(scratch that i didn’t fin reading it) in hopes of never finding it ever again.

    P.s. The demon lord’s sister ain’t suppose to be that easy I mean how, remind me, how many THOUSANDS of years were you alive again?

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    1. I mean demon lord got betrayed… The sister shouldnt trust humans that easily, especially from a spiritualist family but…

      MC`s brother is a douche, come on… He could save his sister but abandoned her because she was not cute enough. A japanese person (reincarnated) letting someone die for a reason like that is just stupid.

      The only part that I enjoyed reading was when MC was killing her brother`s harem, he clearly deserves a bad ending.

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  10. Schedule
    2 chapters a week

    Progress
    Episode 12 – 20%

    While waiting
    Gonna start reading the raws.

    *shrugs*

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